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Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

Romantic, yet brief. I think that's what gives it its strength.

Stone Wolf's avatar

Thank you! I often find a lot of love/sensual poems to be excessive and trying too hard. I feel that we can say so much more with so much less.

Shadow Pursuit's avatar

I can relate to this sort-of longing - for me, when in love, I cannot get enough. You put it so well. 🐦‍⬛

Stone Wolf's avatar

Entirely insatiable 😅

André's avatar

Phewww !!

Deghoulza's avatar

This is fire. Your husband is a lucky man. Cheers to your love.

Stone Wolf's avatar

He sure is 🍒 and thank you 🥰

MargaretGypsy's avatar

Woohoo.... nice one. Took me back to a great night in Barcelona with a friend with benefits.

Stone Wolf's avatar

You should write a poem about it!

MargaretGypsy's avatar

I should. When my poetic inner me comes back to life.

Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

Whew 😅